WinterSpray's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eddsworld - Surf & Turf Wars pt. 1]

Alright, I'll give credit where credit is due. This is infact a new Eddsworld episode which does earn some points. Some positives I have are the animation. I don't really get why you guys went for the 2010 look of Eddsworld for this new generation but I have no complaints about it. I also appreciate the effort to make Tom have a voice but I think it could've been funny if he didn't have one at all. Kind of a charlie chaplin situation or something.

Ok so now to the real meat and potatoes; In fairness, it probably took a long time to get the script written and animated which warrants the need for a part 2. But there are just too many things happening here that seem to never come back up. I get that they may get brought up again in the second part but if they we're supposed to wait until then, why even bring it now at all? Wouldn't it make more sense for that to show up in the second part so it feels like plot progression is actually happening which makes more hype for part 2? I don't know, I'm not a professional writer. (edit: solution; make those things happen later in the animation and not in the beginning.)
I'd also like to take a minute to talk about the jokes. Some of them are actually funny but a lot of them just drag for way too long. For instance, the "cure for all diseases" bit. It took almost an entire minute just to get the point of the bit when you didn't really need it to begin with. Just... have a crab cut the cable or something? I just feel like there could've been a better way than to add an extra minute to this already 11 minute animation.
Last thing I have is Tom's voice. It sounds so widly different from the original. It lost so much of the edge and subtle comedy the old one had. It feels like filling a hole in the wall with gum, it's not as functional as silicone but there isn't a hole in the wall anymore, right?

That's it.

[Angel's whisdom for you to rember in Sember]

booba

[SHEEP ON PARADE]

BRUH!! CAP!!

[Angelcakez teaser animation]

OH MY FUCKING GOD CASEYSHOW IS BACK WTF

[GOKU FEET]

ive never seen dbz so im gonna assume this is how it goes

[I Wonder What's Happening on the Internet Today.]

bro same

[A Message from Fenneko]

hey the phone just teleports in my left hand its not like i can't stop it

[Ultimate Threat]

She will. I've seen it.

[The Now Old : Atlantis]

ok so I just got here from the collab animation you did and I think it would be good for you to get some pointers from a seasoned animator.

I'm assuming you've already gotten some negative feedback so I'm going to be as constructive as I possibly can. To put it simply, this animation is bad. There's no way to get around that but that doesn't mean you still can't be a good animator.
I'd reccomend writing scripts for your future projects. At least something that tells you what story you want to tell beforehand so you don't forget it while working.
It would also help if you made a more original storyline. I take it you've been inspired by Edd Gould (eddsworld) and said "I want to do that" and came out with this. Now, inspiration is one thing but this animation is what we call Plagiarism and it's not a good thing. You could pass this off as a remake or parody and someone would probably believe you because there's no effort to make this your own animation and seperate it from the material you were inspired by.
So, go take some risks! Be prepared to make a character or script that isn't good! It's how we learn and make better products in the future. And be prepared to get a lot of negative criticism but don't let it stop you from countining to create and experiment with animation.

JakesToons responds:

what

[The clean up process]

much better.